Butterfly in the bush
Flying from flower to flower, too fast.
Her shadow loses his way
March 2, 2013 by Horus
Butterfly in the bush
Flying from flower to flower, too fast.
Her shadow loses his way
Posted in Towards Life | Tagged Haiku, Haiku and Related Forms, Literature, love, micro poetry, moments, Poetry, Romance, short form, short form poetry | 16 Comments
her shadow loses his way- means she lost the way to her lover?
Ummm… good to see someone actually read through the lines !
I meant her lover – who followed her always as her shadow – lost his way, as she kept moving from one flower to another…
that is a sad loss if she ever misses him!
what about your next poem?
poem na.. ebar blog likhchhi 🙂
just loved it. I so regret that we are neglecting our treasure of boul songs and palligeeti- I love both very much.
hibernation time up!
wakie wakie bacon and eggie!
perhaps u missed this one – http://nikumbhila.blogspot.com/2013/03/blog-post.html
I don’t/cant read BlogSpot monsieur!
awwww… why?
BlogSpot blogs create a nuisance in my computer. they often crash or after using them other sites crash, malfunction
what are you doing? drained by heat?
ummm.. actually too many things on my plate presently and also being hit by one of my mood swings. 😀
curse that mood swing!
I left a comment in your blog, merrily devoured by your blog it seems! your mood swings stink! get over!